Last login: 11 days agoKrisking
krisking is a 25 year old woman from California, USA.
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Member since Sep 24, 2006
I applaud ALL things random and strange (I don't discriminate). I think puppies are so cute I want to eat their faces. Great design makes me drool. SLR Cameras and Wacom tablets make me slobber. I am a born-again MacOS user. I am tickled by good satire. Macro photography makes me wish I was a ladybug. I'm a fan of fonts (sans-serifs if you please). I read 'til my eyes bleed. I like to rhyme (see previous entry). I have a dog named Apollo...13. I love Harry Potter. I am easily amused. I'm currently a desigNerD but will be an astronaut someday.

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your very flesh shall be a great poem
Liked it Mar 27, 8:57pm 60 reviews http://www.rfincher.com/


My cynical side can't help but think that this is an ideal that we'll never really live up to. Instead of 'shall' (a future tense indicating a strong assertion that the events will occur) it would be more realistic if 'should' (indicating a desirable or obligated state that has yet to be fulfilled) was in its place. Though that one word changes the tone of the entire poem. It'll neither be as romantic or inspirational. But whether it is 'shall' or 'should', if everyone attempted to live their lives through the prose of Walt Whitman, the world would be a greater place.

On another note, I like the simplicity of the page. No distractions--it's just about the words.